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Old 12-11-2013, 10:27 PM   #10761 (permalink)
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Old 12-12-2013, 01:02 AM   #10762 (permalink)
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Not bad man. How old are you btw?

As the other dude said you need to tighten up your flow and delivery.
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Old 12-12-2013, 01:08 AM   #10763 (permalink)
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Old 12-12-2013, 01:11 AM   #10764 (permalink)
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Not bad man. How old are you btw?

As the other dude said you need to tighten up your flow and delivery.
Just turned 19 as of today lol.
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Old 12-12-2013, 01:22 AM   #10765 (permalink)
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Just turned 19 as of today lol.
Lol true you sounded a bit younger. You need more confidence in my opinion, say them bars with some sort conviction. Emphasize the rhyming syllables, that'll help increase some flow and delivery. But forreal though your flow needs to be tidied up a fair amount.
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Old 12-12-2013, 01:24 AM   #10766 (permalink)
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Good points, thanks. I started it as a past time thing a year or so ago. I will be sure to work on it when I get some time
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Old 12-12-2013, 01:28 AM   #10767 (permalink)
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Do you freestyle? That helps improve flow, especially when you switch up beats etc. When you just write you can't expect to have good delivery because your not actually rapping. I know a lot of ppl like that. They can write decent bars but they cant spit it as well as I or someone else could even though it's their own rhymes.
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Old 12-12-2013, 01:31 AM   #10768 (permalink)
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I barely freestyle- only from time to time with friends. When I do freestyle though it's more of just for fun thing. I suck terribly at freestyling though because I can't come up with rhymes on the top of my head, I need to prewritten lyrics.
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Freestyle man, trust me. The rhymes will eventually come easier if you keep trying. You need to actually rap to sound good at rapping. When you just write your not practicing the verbal aspect. This is just my opinion though. Cause yeah ppl can pre-write and then rap it properly but those are ppl that already have their delivery down pat.
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Problem is I don't really get time to do that and rap is like on the lower of my priority list. I'll try to practice it when I do get some time though.

But thanks so much for your feedback, otherwise I will always think I am Nas or something when I am writing/rapping bars.
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Old 12-13-2013, 11:28 AM   #10772 (permalink)
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was watching sesame street with my kid today and there was quite a hilarious moment of adult humour. well to me at least. One of the muppets was talking to a puppeteer (a bit where they talk to random people about their jobs) and the guy was talking about how you can make puppets out of lots of household items. Then the sesmae street charter takes two CD's and holds them like a talking mouth and says (in funny voice) "I'm a compact disc..... nobody loves me anymore.

I LOL'd and my daughter was all 'why are you laughing dad?'
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Old 12-13-2013, 01:20 PM   #10774 (permalink)
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CD sales aren't what they used to be.
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my dad's recently been taking an interest in coffee, and trying out different brewing methods, beans, etc. i want to buy him something coffee-related for christmas. does anyone know of any cool places to buy coffee-related paraphernalia?
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my dad's recently been taking an interest in coffee, and trying out different brewing methods, beans, etc. i want to buy him something coffee-related for christmas. does anyone know of any cool places to buy coffee-related paraphernalia?
Not sure where you live but the Green Beanery on Bloor street is apparently decent.

Balzac's is a pretty good place but not sure what they have paraphernalia wise.

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LOL i got a thumbs down for this post?

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I remember the glory days of 8-track..put a kickass 8-track system in my mom's car after i got my license

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my dad's recently been taking an interest in coffee, and trying out different brewing methods, beans, etc. i want to buy him something coffee-related for christmas. does anyone know of any cool places to buy coffee-related paraphernalia?
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